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My mom scanned it kinda crooked olol
so this is the sketch of this poster-ish thing i'm doing for my book report
yeah
i'm going over it on the computer right now and i'll upload that when its done
ok
Image size
5100x6600px 3.63 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon MX860 series Network
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Okay, my first critique!
I'll start by saying I love this peice. Your style is great, and I like their expressions. I think that Tigerstar's muzzle is a bit thin and long. On the biggest Fireheart picture, his muzzle is a smidge off-center. Lionheart's paws are disproportional to each other, too. Bluestar's tail is a little wonky, and their bodies are too thin. I think that this would look great coloured, it would show their fur and eyes better. I really like Ravenpaw and Tigerstar's expressions. The detail of the fur is great, and I like their different hair styles! Overall, this is a great piece of Warriors fanart, and I look forward to seeing more of your artwork in the future.